Monday, 26 October 2015

Feedback on Proposal Form - Version 1

Today I have received feedback on my first proposal which I submitted. The feedback is from David and the main points are as follows:


- Interesting area of research should provide rich material for a creative project.

- Methodology is more concerned with the overall appearance of the project, does not seem well designed practically, to make the discoveries I am looking for.

- How does giving my project a brand identity help achieve my results?

- Contradiction between the idea of a brand identity and forming a critique of social media. Resolve this contradiction.

- Create a brand identity within social media which somehow functions to question the processes of social media and how they affect the way we interact with each other.


After receiving this feedback I feel like talking to David in person to discuss how I can resolve this contradiction in a professional way and progress my idea.

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